Post by Swiftstar on Jan 9, 2010 14:12:40 GMT -8
Name: Brokenkit paw faith
Age: 34 moons
Clan: StormClan
Gender: Tom (male)
Rank: Warrior
Description: Brokenfaith is a really dark gray tom with a black muzzle that turns into a strip, though on his forehead it kind of looks like a cross. It goes all the way to the tip of his tail. He has medium fur, long legs, a muscular/lean build and he is very large. One of the largest cats in the clans; he has long, curved black claws and shrap, curved teeth.
His eyes are a yellow-orange that when mixed togather they look almost red. They look rather cold, dead and frightening in the correct light. He has three scars over the bridge of his nose and some on his paws from 'different' reasons. Even with all his scars he is still a very handsome cat.
Personality:
Brokenfaith is a very quiet, formal and serious cat. He dislikes jokes and hardly ever laughs or smiles, it takes a lot to make him happy and when it does he usually still hides it. He hates to show feelings and when it does, it's usually sorrow. Hardly anyone speaks to him and though she-cats might flirt he disregards them completely and to a point where they might be hurt from it.
He grimaces often and acts distant, cold and hard.
History:
Born to cold parents, his mother rarely cared about him and only about his sister, Hawkkit. His mother dotted upon her to a point where she spoiled her with gifts and treats. His father on the other hand loved his sister as well but pushed Brokenkit around, causing him to get hurt and sometimes have an emotional break down. Darktalon(father), made Brokenkit start knowing about training early and when he became an apprentice he pushed him hard even if his mentor already did that, he wanted him to be the best. Later on in his training, Hawkpaw proved to be a better apprentice and potential warrior which caused Darktalon to kill her right in front of poor Brokenpaw's eyes.
His mother (Skyflower), upon her grieveing passed away leaving her son with his ruthless father. Before Stormstar's passing he told the leader about what his father had done and exiled him. Brokenpaw became silent that day and his name was changed to Brokenfaith for he himself, had lost far too much hope. Brokenfaith then became friends with Swiftstar and she was probably his only friend and only she could get him to talk.
Roleplay Example:
Silence. Nothing but silence wavered around the cold and distant tom. He didn't let anyone or anything get near him, even the leaves seemed to brush by him, heeding him no answer. Brokenfaith was fine with that, he hardly ever spoke, never laughed, smiled or even hung out with other warriors. He was too lost in his thinking and wallowing.
But that was him, just...there. It would never get better, it would never seem perfect and he was fine with that because after all...his name said it all.
www.malibupetcompanions.org/images/animals/A3792474.jpg --coat color
SECRET PASSWORD: Please Don't Smile
Age: 34 moons
Clan: StormClan
Gender: Tom (male)
Rank: Warrior
Description: Brokenfaith is a really dark gray tom with a black muzzle that turns into a strip, though on his forehead it kind of looks like a cross. It goes all the way to the tip of his tail. He has medium fur, long legs, a muscular/lean build and he is very large. One of the largest cats in the clans; he has long, curved black claws and shrap, curved teeth.
His eyes are a yellow-orange that when mixed togather they look almost red. They look rather cold, dead and frightening in the correct light. He has three scars over the bridge of his nose and some on his paws from 'different' reasons. Even with all his scars he is still a very handsome cat.
Personality:
Brokenfaith is a very quiet, formal and serious cat. He dislikes jokes and hardly ever laughs or smiles, it takes a lot to make him happy and when it does he usually still hides it. He hates to show feelings and when it does, it's usually sorrow. Hardly anyone speaks to him and though she-cats might flirt he disregards them completely and to a point where they might be hurt from it.
He grimaces often and acts distant, cold and hard.
History:
Born to cold parents, his mother rarely cared about him and only about his sister, Hawkkit. His mother dotted upon her to a point where she spoiled her with gifts and treats. His father on the other hand loved his sister as well but pushed Brokenkit around, causing him to get hurt and sometimes have an emotional break down. Darktalon(father), made Brokenkit start knowing about training early and when he became an apprentice he pushed him hard even if his mentor already did that, he wanted him to be the best. Later on in his training, Hawkpaw proved to be a better apprentice and potential warrior which caused Darktalon to kill her right in front of poor Brokenpaw's eyes.
His mother (Skyflower), upon her grieveing passed away leaving her son with his ruthless father. Before Stormstar's passing he told the leader about what his father had done and exiled him. Brokenpaw became silent that day and his name was changed to Brokenfaith for he himself, had lost far too much hope. Brokenfaith then became friends with Swiftstar and she was probably his only friend and only she could get him to talk.
Roleplay Example:
Silence. Nothing but silence wavered around the cold and distant tom. He didn't let anyone or anything get near him, even the leaves seemed to brush by him, heeding him no answer. Brokenfaith was fine with that, he hardly ever spoke, never laughed, smiled or even hung out with other warriors. He was too lost in his thinking and wallowing.
But that was him, just...there. It would never get better, it would never seem perfect and he was fine with that because after all...his name said it all.
www.malibupetcompanions.org/images/animals/A3792474.jpg --coat color
SECRET PASSWORD: Please Don't Smile
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