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Post by Riverstar on Jan 8, 2010 11:03:04 GMT -8
Picture: Name: Stonepaw Gender: She-cat Age: 6 moons Clan: QuakeClan Rank: Kit/Apprentice Description:Stonepaw is a massive she-cat with long legs and small paws. Her eyes are a bright blue and there is a little speckling of white hairs upon her chest. When she grows into a warrior her fur shall be short and sleek. Stonepaw will also be a very large warrior, relying upon her muscle to get her way. Personality:History:On a raining night, her father, Rockclaw, brought Stonekit to QuakeClan. Because Rockclaw was a very fearsome warrior, no one asked him where he got the kit. They simply assumed she had been a lost kit that he found. She was fed by a queen named Jaggedstrike, whom later disappeared with Rockclaw. Stonekit, very disappointed to know that her parents had left her, now looks forward to becoming an apprentice. Roleplay Example:Secret Word:Other:- Real parents: Rockclaw of QuakeClan and Softear of FireClan - Half-Clan Cat (FireClan x QuakeClan) - Prophecy Cat - Will need his Apprentice Ceremony from Leader upon Adoption To Adopt Stonepaw:Please reply to this thread with a roleplay example on how you would play him, a personality description, and the secret word.
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Post by Stonepaw on Jan 9, 2010 1:23:59 GMT -8
Personality: Stonepaw doesn‘t usually let words hurt her, and usually ignores them, unless they have to do with her parents. She likes the way the wind rushing through her fur, being alone, and looking at the stars. She is a thinker, but knows to use her size against her opponent, but prefers peace over violence. She is brave, even if she looks to look at all of the options first before things go to tooth and claw. Her eyes sparkle dimly, and seem to glow at times. When Stonepaw is mad, sad, or thinking, she is generally very quiet, but when she isn’t, she does like to socialize. She can be very straight forward, and out there. She tends to laugh at herself, and then at others. She can be loud, and is the leader type.
Stonepaw’s lids slowly flicker open to reveal bright blue clear orbs, and let them adjust to the dark den. She looked around the den slowly, scanning it for any cats that were still awake. Satisfied at her search, her pushed to her paws silently, a skill she had mastered when her mother had left, and slunk out of the den, her movements swift and quick. The large she-cat’s muscles glided smoothly under her soft, black fur as she moved forward. Before moving forward, she scanned the clearing, and upon seeing no cats, she shot forward silently, and out into the terrain. She let a small sigh escape her gently parted lips, but it was think with untamed relief. She crawled further out, and sat down in an isolated spot. She felt the wind slice through her fur, and gently caress the skin under it with a small rush. She let her surroundings comfort and sooth her as she closed her eyes, and felt her knotted muscles unwind, and her mind settle. She slowly open her bright blue eyes, shining dimly with a soft, happy glow. She looked to the stars, and they reflected in her eyes. She let her lids droop till they were half closed, and another, calmer sigh escaped her throat. ‘Are you up there mama?’ she asked the stars in a silent plea. ‘I love you.’ She found her attention drawn to the borders. ‘Good, no one is there, no fighting, that’s good too, but if there was someone, they would leave with no ears.’ She let another gust of wind rush through her fur, and sighed happily. She got to her paws in one swift movement, and turned, her pelt glistening lightly, and started to head back to camp for sleep she needed for the full day ahead. She would be going to her first gathering, and she needed to be her best, so she didn’t blurt out any mouse brained words. She DID want to meet some new cats, and them gossip with her friends that weren’t going. She slunk into her camp with out a sound, and then sprinted silently to her den, and crawled in, laying down in her now cold spot. She closed her eyes quickly and curled into a tight ball, and started to feel her mind drift into the blackness sleep offered, Soon, she was lost in a abyss of darkness as black as her fur as she lost her scenes for the night, as pictures of different cats, gossip, and leaders shot through her fogged mind.
Secret word: please don't smile
((That SHOULD be better, but if there are anymore problems, just pm me, and I'll fix them post haste!))
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Post by Riverstar on Jan 9, 2010 12:31:10 GMT -8
Looks good Heather. You don't have to make your posts this big on the forum unless it is like an introduction post or something. Otherwise, about a quarter to half that will be acceptable for now.
Stonepaw is yours. You may roleplay her as Stonekit until Crackedstar gives you a mentor.
Accepted/Closed/Moved
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Post by Stonepaw on Jan 9, 2010 12:32:11 GMT -8
Cool, and thanks! lol, good, I couldn't post that much each time, my arms would fall off!
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